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"Climate change is a pressing global issue that affects almost every aspect of our lives. Rising temperatures lead to melting ice caps, which in turn cause sea levels to rise. This can result in coastal flooding, displacing millions of people. Additionally, extreme weather events like hurricanes and droughts are becoming more frequent and severe. Scientists agree that human activities, such as burning fossil fuels and deforestation, are the main contributors to this problem. To mitigate climate change, we need to transition to renewable energy sources, reduce carbon emissions, and promote sustainable practices like reforestation."
Then I can rewrite it concisely as:
"Climate change—driven mainly by human activities like fossil fuel use and deforestation—poses a critical global threat. Key impacts include rising sea levels (from melting ice caps) leading to coastal flooding, and more frequent severe extreme weather (hurricanes, droughts). Mitigation requires switching to renewables, cutting carbon emissions, and adopting sustainable practices like reforestation."
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